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Kitty**
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0 posted 1999-10-13 04:17 PM



So very much to say..
so much left unsaid.
So many things in the past,
So many days ahead.

So many things to ponder,
So much is never known.
So much love to give,
So much never shown.

So very much concealed inside.
So many things we hide.
Life's a bitch, it still goes on,
Inside we feel we've died.

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-10-14 10:15 AM


'So much never shown' such a true statement.I wonder where we would all be if we showed just a little more! Well done verse.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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2 posted 2004-05-04 03:39 AM


I know that feeling
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