Open Poetry #3 |
Treasures (for Pepper) |
Sunshine
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Treasures (for Pepper) There is a sweet peace that presides in me when someone reads my simple homilies and then to find I’ve inspired someone’s mind a feel for wording, something that rhymes. I’ve recently found some pleasant leisure in sharing poetry with the best of friends ~ I’ve nothing to fear, and nothing to hide, my shyness has taken a backseat ride. Then taking another step, one that is large I’ve gone from small ship to a great barge in attempting a children’s story, simple, true; and now IT’S out for opine and review! Oh my, where are my footsteps now taking me? Some place, it seems, where there looms mystery! Will my work be ever praised or duly condemned? Oh never mind, fear nor sorrow I shall not spend because my work is from love in my heart, I’ve learned that these simple words do impart A gift of sorts, to people world ‘round, ‘tis a treasure I’m given, and peace that I’ve found. 30 September, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh my! Sunshine.....rigt now I am speechless and using the Kleenix abundantly.....thank you, my special friend for all that you are to me...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sunshine
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Pepper, we are all proud of your first effort. We just want to see more! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was wonderful Sunshine! |
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Sunshine
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Whtdove, Thanks! It took Pepper a long time to get up the courage to post a piece, but she did, and we should all be proud of her...and anyone who can get over the shyness of pouring out their soul's thoughts. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A good poem for a wonderful person. Pepper, it appears your audience awaits....... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I couldn't have said it better...well spoken Pepper ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Excellent Sunshine! |
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Sunshine
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Thanks 'Deer, Hoot and John. I think Pepper will do quite well down the road. |
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