Open Poetry #3 |
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Turning of the Mind {Circa 1969} |
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Sunshine
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Turning of the Mind Circa 1969 As the sun sets slowly in the west another day is passing, having tried for best. I’ve thought of you more, certainly not less; what I’ll think tomorrow is only a guess. The tradewinds of my life pass, I grow older, never again the lass that wandered and searched the sky ~ for I know that all things eventually pass by. As I reach for a wiseness that is considered young to my elders who are far wiser, I feel the days speeding by reaching for a goal much faster, for I. Who am I to slow time down? Yet why must my path be grooved in the ground, when my heart yearns to soar the air; and for a moment, I turn devil-may-care. Again that silken haired child am I, set back then to ask the inevitable “why” ~ waiting for an answer, then asking “how” or “when”, I’d wait for my answer, and not leave until then. But as I turn around and open my eyes, much too quickly I come to realize that the past is behind me, the future is ahead. So I’ll think to say what others have not said. The flicker of a growing flame throws shadows at my own life’s game, making me think of other names, and I turn to you again. For around you my life is now centered, and I find that a bit of trouble makes the splendor a lot more real and its’ also worthwhile when I see that I can make you smile. Things are always getting better as disappointment can come from the best; and this is why I say, dear friend that I think of you more, and never less. ©KRJ 29 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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Very beautiful, Susnhine! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Denise! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
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Sunshine: These thoughts should be back on top.. ![]() HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Thanks Rainbow. Get a kick out of how old it is? |
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caroline Senior Member
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Sunshine I see you were born with talent ![]() This is lovely! I always enjoy your poetry, and reading yours from years ago is just as good. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
alot of wisdom from one so young.....loved this piece Sunshine ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Caroline; I don't know if we can call it talent, but it is something... Thanks Pepper. Will you be this old lady's fan club President? LOL |
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