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Outlaw Dawn
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Outlaw Dawn |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon 
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----- Original Message ----- From: dj burt <danandwendy@juno.com> To: <shasta99@uswest.net> Sent: Thursday, September 30, 1999 12:47 AM Subject: Re: hi guys This came from my brother who lives in Oklahoma. He started being a dope dealer. Thank God he quit that. Then he became an outlaw biker. Then he became a preacher...then he became a cop..now he's an outlaw biker preacher. > > Outlaw Dawn > > Sin all came crashin down, hard > love most ever known, even dreamed, dead. > Wee hours of darkest, coldest, winter night > alone, broken, crazy, out of head. > > Gun barrel freezin to wet cheek > heavy metal shakin out lonely blues. > Twisted love poundin, tearin out the speakers > been here so many times, why it feelin new? > > God whisperin to hold on til dawn > ain't thinkin, can't stand no more wait. > Filled with molten lava called sorrow > freezin out, insides burnin with hate. > > Nother day, stoned cold, hatin > sick and tired o' being sick and tired. > Pain, sorrow, alone...Ghost be talkin > history stayin, whether drunk or wired. > > God whisperin again, won't leave it alone > memories, seein a little boy a prayin. > was it me, nother night so long ago > hey speak up God, > i need to hear what you're sayin... > > D.J.Burt 9/99 > Wendy Isle > (all rights reserved) ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey! Is Toerag your brother???? this was a deep poem |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like the finale, WildChild |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is what is called REAL poetry. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic! ------------------ Denise |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Glad you liked it guys. Been tryin' to talk him into comin' and checkin' us out but he's been real busy with his webmastering gigs so doesn't think he'll have the time. I'm gonna keep tryin though lol ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very intense....WildChild, I see talent runs in the family..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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