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Two Little Flowers
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Two Little Flowers |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Two Little Flowers (Its long so, If you dont have time to read it, dont.) Down in the meadow O’er yon hill To the left of the wood And next to the mill, Two little flower's hands held high Two little flowers in want they cry, “Where is yellow where is gold” Poor little petals All shrivelled and cold; Down in the meadow Next to the mill They spied there one- eyed On hilltop_ still, The glowing eye its rays beseech A call to all to test their reach. One little flower All petaled in blue Did chat to other of what to do, “Align with me- We’ll catch the bright, Together our petals, in chase of light.” The other little flower All petaled in red Uprooted herself from shadowy bed, And so together- With Petals in hand They skipped away to a brighter land. They ran to the wood Away from the mill Down to the meadow and up the hill, Two little flowers On hilltop sighed To see in distance they’re golden eyed, It was on the horizon Gently leaning, O’ dear… They missed their chance Of warmth and feeling. On hilltop bare They shed a dew From petals red and petals blue, To miss their eye It was a shame But not for trying, or wanting the same, Two little souls A sorrowful sight Alone on the hill in the darkest of night. Two little souls On hilltop bare Gazed at new light shining there, It was not as bright But somehow nice To see a face on that cold night_ and then, By chance, a comet bright Did mark its name in passing flight, Two little souls were held in ore To see its flurry In heavens soar, Both agreed To stay a while And watch in wonder, this heavenly smile. For on that hill They spied a light And then another they twinkled bright In fact, the night was full of wonder, A dog a bear A thingamabob too, Knowing not constellations, they named a few To add a touch of romance and flair A chorus of crickets did serenade the pair; Two new lovers One red one blue Did swap their petals In love, 'Tis true. Many days And starry nights Were spent on hilltop there, And if perchance You find romance In sharing moonlight air, Then mind your step For you’ll regret To step on flowers there, For every hill In every land Has flowers on hilltops bare… ………………………… Down in the meadow O’er yon hill To the left of the wood And next to the mill, Two little flower's hands held high Two little flowers, no want no cry, Yes, they’ve found the answer No chasing light, just cuddle together, Sometimes blue And sometimes red Content they lay In there flowery bed, But when it’s dark, on that hill, at night, They petal together In romantic light… U K Hero. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Absolutely love this UK!!!...:.. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
This is exceptional! I just want to read it over and over. It is such a beautiful love story. Thank you. Wow! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Long? I don't think so...and it is time well spent in reading it. I loved it!  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Thank you poeteers, I have to say I was deeply concerned that it would not be enjoyed by readers within the forum. Your comments are inspiring thank you. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Just beautiful! Thank-You! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What, no purple prodigy from the passion of blue and red? [Joke {~,^}] Very different, and enjoyable reading. Thanks, UK! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
exceptional this is U K........love it........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem! I like the image of those two little flowers in love on that hill! I'm going to look for them!  |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
This one makes you want to fall in love.... over and over and over. |
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