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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-09-30 01:49 AM


Woman's heart is won through the spoken word.
Man's portal to love are his open eyes.
Silence speaks volumes usually unheard.
Man is blind to the love he scorns with lies.

No one is exempt from seduction's call.
Seduction plays on the strings of the heart.
Loneliness to sweet seduction will fall.
A true silver tongue is a work of art.

Silken words flow from a velvet tongue.
Softly spoken words will caress the ears.
Words of romance make everyone feel young.
To capture a heart you must soothe it's fears.

Please heed well all my gentle instruction.
I once practiced the art of seduction.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 1999-09-30 01:56 AM


Very good sir.
Maybe the sivler tongue works so well, because it is through our minds that we love?
Good message and story DE!

Dragoness
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2 posted 1999-09-30 02:39 AM


Very well done brother of my heart!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Michael
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3 posted 1999-09-30 03:25 AM


A true snake in the grass you are...Good work, Dream.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.



Dark Angel
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4 posted 1999-09-30 06:08 AM


Soul-Brother, this is truly wonderful well done!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-09-30 12:08 PM


"to capture a heart you must soothe it's fears"...hmmmm *tilts her head and thinks*...yep....sigh...great poem, the insight is what makes it so good
Dolphins3
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6 posted 1999-09-30 12:12 PM


I loved it. You write beautifully.
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7 posted 1999-09-30 01:15 PM


Well done, DE!!!
JennyLee
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8 posted 1999-10-01 10:31 AM


Amen ! ! !

Jenny

Sunshine
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9 posted 1999-10-01 11:57 AM


DE, see "God's Message To Women:" posted in Passions In Prose. For some reason, I thought this a fine response to your wonderful piece here.

Sally S.
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10 posted 1999-10-01 01:09 PM


Dream,
You work has grown soooo much over what seems such a short time. Very well done...and point well taken.

DreamEvil
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11 posted 1999-10-01 08:00 PM


Again, thank you to all.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


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