Open Poetry #3 |
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Seduction |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Woman's heart is won through the spoken word. Man's portal to love are his open eyes. Silence speaks volumes usually unheard. Man is blind to the love he scorns with lies. No one is exempt from seduction's call. Seduction plays on the strings of the heart. Loneliness to sweet seduction will fall. A true silver tongue is a work of art. Silken words flow from a velvet tongue. Softly spoken words will caress the ears. Words of romance make everyone feel young. To capture a heart you must soothe it's fears. Please heed well all my gentle instruction. I once practiced the art of seduction. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Very good sir. Maybe the sivler tongue works so well, because it is through our minds that we love? Good message and story DE! |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Very well done brother of my heart! ![]() ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A true snake in the grass you are...Good work, Dream. ------------------ Michael Anderson May Darkness find you all through the day. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, this is truly wonderful ![]() ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
"to capture a heart you must soothe it's fears"...hmmmm *tilts her head and thinks*...yep....sigh...great poem, the insight is what makes it so good ![]() |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
I loved it. You write beautifully. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, DE!!! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Amen ! ! ! Jenny |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DE, see "God's Message To Women:" posted in Passions In Prose. For some reason, I thought this a fine response to your wonderful piece here. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Dream, You work has grown soooo much over what seems such a short time. Very well done...and point well taken. ![]() |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Again, thank you to all. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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