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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
Postlude Forgotten, grown old, busying the days, little essential, confused memories scold from afar, segues lack the potential to steer or reform cloistered attitudes. While those absent warm cliched platitudes, the music retards, crescendo sotto voce, bravo regards, cut flowers...grotto. --H. Arlequin . . . . Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm [This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 10-14-1999).] [This message has been edited by H. Arlequin (edited 10-25-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, know what you mean! Very well done, says so much with so few words!  ------------------ Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
Hi Denise, I revised it and I hope u like the results as well as the first :-) HA |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Wonderful! You certainly are a master of words! ------------------ Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
revised, again .....sigh |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow, I can't believe you keep making it better.....hmmmmm, reminds me of something Balladeer said about Barbara Streisand and her striving for perfection in her recording of a particular piece. I guess that is the sign of a truly talented person! Well done, H.A.!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Good reading! Nicely done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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