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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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My heart dreamt of magic last night swimming with dolphins in oceans below flying along on velvety clouds walking where the flowers grow Beautiful colours lighting my way rainbow resplendent in various hues I found a land of peaceful dreams where I lay kissed by morning dew On I flew through day and night images playing serenely in my mind guided by stars shining so bright seeking what I couldn't find On wings of hope we carried on angels guiding as night turned to light and there in the early rising dawn - my lover with candle burning bright.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And his candle was lit for you, Because of all the things you do, And you're like so very few, One in a million, this candle for you! But before you decide to go, Remember the candle was lit by Toe! Very nice poem Brit.... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Darling: Trust you...I'm sat here with tears in my eyes, when this mail arrives and now I'm laughing so much I'm travelling on wind..ROFLMAO HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno dearie....old Balladeer "travels on wind" too.....we won't discuss where it came from however...I gotta go teach a class, as usual, I'm late.....see ya |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't write a poetic response as fine as Toe's... but I'll echo him in complimenting a poem well done! And ROFLMAO at traveling on wind!!! *G* |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Beautiful poem RG ... and I see that Toe is still full of hot air ... LOL [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
beautiful  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bless you all for your comments and laughter..*g* HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Rainbow.....beautiful imagery, I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for the read ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
magical Rainbow....I've just read it three times in a row.....I love the way it makes me feel..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Another hert-felt triumph RG! "where I lay kissed by morning dew" Don't you think that was supposed to be: "where I lay drinking my mountain dew?" LOL HUGS |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Once again....I am changing my name to Mountain Dew!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wow, this is very good..........you are very good.........glad to be your friend. (can I keep this one) ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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