Open Poetry #3 |
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Remembering Me(Challenge by Isis) |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
When I'm gone I hope to see All my friends happy and free Laughing as they think of me And remembering how I used to be Remembering how I'd help them out Casting aside all their doubts A hug and a smile was theirs to take Knowing them I'd never forsake I want them to remember Good times and bad How I could go From happy to sad Seeing all the kids and animals I love Remembering a touch, soft as a dove Knowing that I'll be watching you And seeing all of the things that you do I'd like to think in their hearts I'll remain And hope this helps them over their pain But if nothing else they recall of me Remember the loving heart in me ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Always sister-mine, until my own last breath. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Agreed, and I hope I won't have to fufil that part of the bargain for a long time! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is very good, and I'm sure this is the way you will be remembered. But you forgot your poetry...your loving heart will shine in that as well! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
you plan on staying around for a long time to write more poetry...ya hear?? RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very touching piece...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Shar New Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 6Hesperia, Ca. USA |
Very warm, I am sure you will be remembered with love...... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just knowing what I do of you on here, I don't think anyone is going to have a problem remembering you like this. Nicely done. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Thank-You all for your replies. This is my final Goodbye. ------------------ Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the soul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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