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Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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0 posted 1999-10-09 03:13 AM


When I'm gone I hope to see
All my friends happy and free
Laughing as they think of me
And remembering how I used to be

Remembering how I'd help them out
Casting aside all their doubts
A hug and a smile was theirs to take
Knowing them I'd never forsake

I want them to remember
Good times and bad
How I could go
From happy to sad

Seeing all the kids and animals I love
Remembering a touch, soft as a dove
Knowing that I'll be watching you
And seeing all of the things that you do

I'd like to think in their hearts I'll remain
And hope this helps them over their pain
But if nothing else they recall of me
Remember the loving heart in me



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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


© Copyright 1999 Dragoness - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-09 03:17 AM


Always sister-mine, until my own last breath.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-10-09 03:52 AM


Agreed, and I hope I won't have to fufil that part of the bargain for a long time!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-10-09 07:26 AM


This is very good, and I'm sure this is the way you will be remembered. But you forgot your poetry...your loving heart will shine in that as well!
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-10-09 11:46 AM


you plan on staying around for a long time to write more poetry...ya hear??

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 1999-10-09 12:55 PM


Very lovely!

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Denise

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 1999-10-09 02:55 PM


very touching piece......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Shar
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 6
Hesperia, Ca. USA
7 posted 1999-10-09 04:05 PM


Very warm, I am sure you will be remembered with love......
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-10-10 12:21 PM


Just knowing what I do of you on here, I don't think anyone is going to have a problem remembering you like this. Nicely done.
Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

9 posted 1999-10-12 08:23 PM


Thank-You all for your replies. This is my final Goodbye.

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the soul


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
10 posted 2004-05-04 03:50 AM


nice
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