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Morning Star Signal
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Morning Star Signal |
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CaiTheJediPoet New Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 2Houston, TX, USA |
This torments me how I can't look into your eyes How frightening without some kind of surprise Such fantasy Do I find hidden under deep veils of sorrow and pain No don't look back now My home, my heart, my soul, my hands all find their place within where you stand please oh please be that one ideal man be the one that's intrinsic to my being be the one from my dreams I'm always seeing be the pattern that makes me flow be the rhythm that makes me go be all that I need and I'll be I'll be everything you can see I'll be as far as the plaisn spread I'll be your wide eyed rabbit with a timid stare I'll let you run your fingers through my silkspun hair I'll talk with you until 3 am I'll make you casserole and break off the broccoli stems Just do whatever makes you who you are and be with me until we see the furst morning star. ------------------ Cai the Jedi Poet |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
This would flow better if you drop a few of the I'll's everything you can see as far as the plains spread your wide eyed rabbit with a timid stare run your fingers through my silkspun hair talk with you until 3 am Like this one.  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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