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Jim Raynor
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since 1999-09-19
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA

0 posted 1999-10-04 06:14 PM


“Alone”
Do you know what it like to be alone?,
When every one in the world is with the person they love,
Every one but you,
Your just all alone no one to hold,
no one to talk to,
no one to tell “I love you” to,
no one to tell your problems to,
no one to tell you that your appreciated,
no one to show how much you love them,
no one’s hand to hold,
no one to stop you from doing something wrong,
no one to tell you that your loved,
no one to tell you that you have a reason to live,…
I know how it feels…
It feels like your life has drifted onto a deserted desert island,
It feels like you have no reason to live,
It feels like there is no one that loves you,
It feels like your heart was just taken and manipulated,
It’s feeling is indescribable by any word but I have known the feeling of being alone…
Because I am alone…,”

-Jim R.
P.S. its not always bad to be alone but in my case it is really bad
P.S.S. if any one knows a Deanna Merrill in Missouri A.K.A. Diona Merrill Please let me know.


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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.

© Copyright 1999 Jim Raynor - All Rights Reserved
Rhiannon
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA
1 posted 1999-10-04 06:26 PM


being alone is something we have all been through or will go through...i really like how that indescribable feeling can somehow be described...and in a very good way!

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The night is my companion
The solitude my guide
Would I spend forever here
And not be satisfied?
Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession"

Jim Raynor
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since 1999-09-19
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA
2 posted 1999-10-04 06:43 PM


Thanks Rhiannon for your kind words and response

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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.

Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
3 posted 1999-10-04 06:55 PM


Being alone sucks

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

Jim Raynor
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since 1999-09-19
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA
4 posted 1999-10-04 06:57 PM


Star Fairy2 of course being alone sucks but not all the time of course, sometimes its better to be alone than to be with someone else, especially if that some one else has bad B.O. hehehe

-Jim Raynor

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Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor
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"Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-04 10:02 PM


I see you have been practicing in your absence Sir. Jim...well done

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 1999-10-05 01:17 PM


have been there too Jim.......loved the way you expressed it........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Starith
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
7 posted 1999-10-05 09:29 PM


Jim I know what it feels like to be alone...it hurts so much at times...but life will get better. It seems to have a funny way of turning around just when you think it's not possible. I hope your life takes that turn soon!

Star

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-10-06 01:56 AM


We have all been alone at some time and will be again. Great piece. Use the time is my advice, do the stuff you've never had time to before..and guess what else, you won't be alone for long...

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
9 posted 1999-10-06 11:39 AM


It's worse to be 'alone' in a relationship than just alone...the emptiness is greater then. I am alone now, but not as alone as I was when I was married! Good poem, Jim. Thought provoking.....

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
10 posted 1999-10-06 11:42 AM


I know all too well... but I do agree with PDV! *S*
toocute4u_27
Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA
11 posted 1999-10-09 01:18 AM


Being alone is hard. But remember were never truly alone, God is always with us.
Pufalove
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 119
Houston, Tx. USA
12 posted 1999-10-09 01:39 AM


Very expressive, but ahhh Sir Jim, you are not alone........you have all of us!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


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