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In the garden of Muse
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In the garden of Muse |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Dressed up in ten thousand hues The sky was reflecting the ground Somewhere in the garden of Muse Leaves were concealing a noun Collecting the nectar of thoughts Poets and writers resembled the bees Filled with meanings, ideas and words Ripened verses hung off the trees Blowing around the worn out cliches Autumn’s breeze swept through the garden Breathing the mist straight into my face The evening seemed lively and ardent Lurking around the face of the clock Hands of time crept on their toes And leaving the garden I felt on my back Stares of praise and bewildered applause ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling [This message has been edited by Master (edited 10-15-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
BRAVO! And 'Hands of time crept on their toes'...fabulous! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
And stares and applause are quite due...well written Master. Kind of a mate between reality and a dream world on this one. I like!! ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks Denise and HOot! I'm glad you liked it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You're welcome, Master, 'twas absolutely splendiferous!! (is that a word? If not it should be!)  ------------------ Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhh, Master....I liked this a lot ! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent! Fabulous read!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I thought this one was buried, but it resurrected. Thanks for bringing me back to life! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Hmmm ... what a captivating image. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Another superb piece, my friend! Deserving of resurrection, I say. Glad I didn't miss it this time around. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks Nochtdraco and Caroline! I'm glad you guys liked it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yes! |
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