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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Hoping A grounded swan is still guided by instinctual yearnings to waters calm and free- A man confined will wish liberty from captors and shackles- And lovers separated by the gulf of emotions will build bridges. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful piece of writing. ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Denise, you always make me want to write more and more and more. Thank you so much. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You're welcome! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
EXCELLENT!!! Robert, there is not a wasted word amoung the bunch of them here and you speak from your heart in your words. This was wonderful...now off to build a few bridges  ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
You go Ruth!!! You go Girl....you don't have to be an engineer to build a bridge. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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