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the "time" of our lives
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the "time" of our lives |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Time As surely as the plow tears through the soil- uprooting disrupting furrowing... preparing the field for cultivation, time just as surely plows through our lives- birth growth death... leaving its mark on generations. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And we can only hope to leave a 'mark' of worth. Well done, Robert. ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Robert...okay, I becoming a fan here...got to write something I don't like  ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Robert I enjoyed this one very much....Jenny |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good one Robert! I like your imagery!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just as there is erosion to the soil, also can a family erode, if not taken care of. Well done, Sir! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you all...I guess my experiences in life have just left me with this awe of the whole deal....thank you. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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