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Michael
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0 posted 1999-10-08 12:20 PM


TRUE AMERICAN

We see you sitting, dark and silent,
War paint on your face.
Time for words is far beyond you,
Rage now sets in its place.

You cry out in anger for your people,
Yet most have tasted the great wrong.
A few remain, but we shun the pain.
Refuse to dance the white man's song.

We loved the land they stole from us,
As our spears fell to the gun.
Now we watch, silent, from the shadows-
That the bloodline may still run.

We never learned the modern language,
Though our words may come the same.
Ambush lies upon the tongue,
The pale man's false words bear no shame.

We are your people, we hear your cry,
It falls not on deaf ears.
But we hold clean spirit, we hold our pride,
And we've passed the time for tears.

For the white man is now the drunken fool,
We've nothing material left to prey.
Now the U.S. Government is stealing all from them,
In the true American way.


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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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1 posted 1999-10-08 12:25 PM


Excellent poem! Mind If I share this with a few of my Native friends??

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


DreamEvil
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2 posted 1999-10-08 12:37 PM


Righteously written my friend. The worm turns as do the tides of time, we have come nearly full circle.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Michael
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3 posted 1999-10-08 02:31 PM


Dragoness, you would be doing me an honor to share this with your Native American friends. That is most assuredly who this was written for.

Dream, indeed, we have nearly discovered the meaning of "manifest destiny".

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.



Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
4 posted 1999-10-08 02:53 PM


A very sad saga of reality.....

We were riding along in the car on a plateau in Colorado, going to Aspen. We saw something up ahead on the roadside. It was an Eagle, the symbol of American freedom, feathers rumpled, standing in a dirty patch of snow, hitch-hiking. I doubt this will make sense to many, but I do believe it will to Michael....

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 1999-10-08 06:26 PM


Michael,
It is an old, old story and has been repeated beyond count and as long as we exist
will go on. But your poetry is new and I enjoyed it.

freespiritfem
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since 1999-10-07
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Cordova,Alabama,USA
7 posted 1999-10-08 06:44 PM


I am very touched by your very true words,thank you Michael...

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Paula Diane S.

Elizabeth
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8 posted 1999-10-08 06:46 PM


How very true, Michael. What goes around comes around.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


Balladeer
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10 posted 1999-10-08 09:30 PM


No words can do justice to the wrongs inflicted on the true Americans. It is a spot of shame on our nation that can never be erased.
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 1999-10-09 12:18 PM


Wow...well done Michael!!
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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12 posted 1999-10-09 12:19 PM


As this subject is very close to my heart and my heritage;it made me very sad. I have seen life on a goverment run "reservation"
It is full of hopelessness and hardship. My Grandmother escaped, but many in my family did not. Your work, as always is impeccable.

Jennifer

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-09-1999).]

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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13 posted 1999-10-09 04:33 AM


Michael: Tradition and heritage seems to have lost all value these days...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
14 posted 1999-10-09 05:29 AM


I'll just add a well done, as your words have said it all Michael.
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