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freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

0 posted 1999-10-08 03:47 PM

Come to me "My Love",and
breathe me in,
Knowing all the places to
begin.
Bring me to that special
place of bliss,
Getting lost in your
eyes,this i miss.

Together,our bodies so close
we become "One",
I know all our trips to
ecstasy have just begun.
As i close my eyes it seems
like only yesterday,
Entangled in your body is
where i want to stay.

As i drink you in my thirst
for you gets stronger,
With the "Love" we share
there is no wonder.
The memories of "Us" will
always last,
We wont shut the door,we will
just visit the past.

My heart was asleep like a
dormant volcano,
With your love ,it has
awakened and is about to
explode.
My soul so desolte and dark,
But now it glows with a
magical spark.

So come to me and breathe me
in,
We know now just where to
begin.

©1999 Paula Diane S.

David G. i love you so
"deeply" and
"passionately"...thank you
for awaking this spirit in
me!!!

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Paula Diane S.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-08 04:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful!

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Denise

Jucco
New Member

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3
austin,Texas,Usa

2 posted 1999-10-08 05:15 PM

Oh, Paula..I can feel the passion in your words,this is a beautiful and heartfelt piece of work, Very well done,i'm looking forward to more of work.

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Lee D.

freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

3 posted 1999-10-08 07:19 PM

if anyone can give me any suggestions , please, i need all the input i can get..thanks bunches!!!!

Huggs!!!

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Paula Diane S.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 1999-10-08 10:04 PM

You are very expressive and passionate! Loved your Poem!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-10-09 12:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful.....I love these lines :
"As i drink you in my thirst
for you gets stronger,"
Welcome to Passions!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 1999-10-09 06:54 AM

Lovely poem with a depth of feeling.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-10-09 09:03 AM

freespiritfem,
Well done enjoyed the read.

freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

8 posted 1999-10-09 05:43 PM

Thank you all for your kind words and replys,
this means very much too me...
thanks:dsnyder,Jucco,Romantic Heart,hoot_owl_rn,Poet deVine,and Seymour Tabin

BIG HUGGS!!!

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Paula Diane S.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 1999-10-09 05:48 PM

This is wonderful, Paula. There is never enough uplifting and romantic poetry....especially when it is so well done.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

10 posted 1999-10-09 06:11 PM

a very lovely piece freespiritfem.....very passionate

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

11 posted 1999-10-09 09:55 PM

Simply Stunning....

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

lonly_Heart
New Member

since 1999-10-10

Posts 2
Sebastian,Fl-usa

12 posted 1999-10-10 11:38 AM

I really love the "passion" in your words,simply beautiful!!!

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Elizabeth

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 1999-10-10 04:40 PM

This love you feel makes beautiful poetry. "Breathe Me In" is such a great phrase.

freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

14 posted 1999-10-14 02:17 PM

Thanks Pepper, Alwye,Balladeer,Martie.and Lonly_heart!!!

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Paula Diane S.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 1999-10-14 02:28 PM

Beautiful!

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

16 posted 1999-10-14 03:14 PM

very passionate, very beautiful

charamyst
New Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 6

17 posted 1999-10-27 07:09 PM

This is very beautiful, you make me feel your passion. I am new to this and hope you will read some of my work and give me your honest opinion.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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18 posted 2004-05-16 07:55 PM

precious

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