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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-10-07 05:48 PM

Feel the music in your heart,
Touching softly, 'twill impart,
Upon the soul, heartfelt romance,
Two joined as one in sensual dance,
Passions coursing through the night,
Swaying softly, in Luna's light,
In song's reprise, love's symphony,
I sought my love, please come to me,
Sweet songs embrace, deep satin kiss,
I sought, I found, my mortal bliss,
But then the dawn, into the night,
The music fades in morn's first light,
On final note, so ends the dance,
As dancers wait for love's next chance
To turn away the lance of pain,
And dance again the sweet refrain.

Strains of Gershwin soothe the night,
With songs of love, Eros' delight,
Music kisses on the soul,
As passion's note, our hearts control,
Silence broken by the dance
Of two entwined, in song's romance,
Trembling as the harpist's string,
As from the heavens muses sing,
Dulcinea, come to me,
Together through eternity,
In my arms shall ever sway,
Throughout the nights, til break of day,
And with first light the dance is done,
Until once more the setting sun,
O' how I hunger for the night,
To dance once more, by heaven's light.

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-07 06:32 PM

Very nice.Loved this poem!

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-07 07:41 PM

beautifully written a symphony in words

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-07 08:07 PM

Mike, I could feel the 'Rhythm of the Night'! Excellent!

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Denise

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

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4 posted 1999-10-07 08:23 PM

You conducted this symphony beautifully, Maestro

It is truly superb.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 1999-10-07 10:50 PM

Thank you all for your comments...
this is one of my personal favorites...

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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6 posted 1999-10-08 02:46 AM

Your poem is so beautiful and it took me back to the renasience period...In which I feel I came from...Very heartfelt and romantic love poetry!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 1999-10-09 09:54 PM

I think it may be one of mine too, Mike...

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