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Open Poetry #3

Choosing to Believe

HM3
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 169
TX

0 posted 1999-10-06 10:23 PM

Don't bother calling you can't reach me by phone
If you drop by you'll find that nobody's home
I'm out chasing yesterdays, the way I used to be
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

While I've been out running, you're every where I go
I've seen you so many places but you don't even know
I'm trying to find it, the me I want to be
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

Looking through those yesterdays, one memory at a time
I don't find why I love you, the reason or the rhyme
So I dig my garden and hope to sow the seed
Sharing and caring, choosing to believe

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-06 11:08 PM

Very nice, 'sharing and caring, choosing to believe'. I like how you repeat that line!

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Denise

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-07 02:21 PM

Well, I liked it, though a bit vague,,,,,,choosing to believe in what?

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

3 posted 1999-10-07 02:30 PM

Keep believing! Lovely poem.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

4 posted 1999-10-07 02:34 PM

well I agree, it leaves a few questions, but overall, I like the sentiment

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

5 posted 1999-10-07 04:37 PM

I like the message here. Searching for the best we can be.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

6 posted 1999-10-07 05:41 PM

I like you choice in beliefs..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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