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Open Poetry #3

Death

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-10-04 06:37 PM

My faith and trust are swept like straws,
From out my grasp by tempest's woe,
As I devour the bitter ash,
Of soul's despair of haunting sorrow.

Dank and gloomy mausoleum,
Erected by death's loathsome lust,
Man's unperverted ethereal mask,
Conventions are by evil crushed.

Shrouded chambers of formless haunts,
Recoil in horror as shadows bleed,
Clouds of terror reach fingers out,
Dark spirits stalk; hell hath decreed.

Wtih mournful soul and quivering limbs,
Am touched upon by lifeless breath,
Unrelenting desolation,
Stand face to face with sin and death.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-04 08:06 PM

Mike, you have certainly depicted the emotions that death can bring to the ones left behind. And, once again, I must say I am in awe of your talent!

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Denise

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 1999-10-04 10:15 PM

Thank you for the comment Denise. Just a little experiment.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-10-07 05:18 PM

An excellent experiment, I might add.

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