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Our Star |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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I gazed into the darkened sky and wished upon a star. That you might feel the love I send no matter where you are. I dropped a penny in a well and closed my eyes up tight. Hoping that you feel my love surrounding you at night. I know the distance seems so great the miles stretch between. And though I can’t be there with you don’t be afraid to lean. You see my love my strength is yours and I will carry you. When you feel frightened and alone and don’t know what to do. I know that were it possible you’d be right here with me. But God in heaven has a plan that only he can see. So when your feeling lonely and I seem to be so far. Look into the sky my love and wish upon "our" star. [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful poem, Lucie. I needed a message of hope right now. This is beautiful. ------------------ Michael Anderson I could not love except where Death Was mingling his with Beauty's breath - Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny Were stalking between her and me. EAP |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful Lucie, it touched something, somewhere inside of me. And I think that is the biggest compliment you could get! Thankyou!!! ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Your everpresent humor and joy are indeed a comfort to us all dear Lady. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Simply loved it! WOW!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very well done, Lucie!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Like I said, on your serious side, you are untouchable. Good work, Lucie. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Something I wish I'd written. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
This was great. Nice job! ------------------ Anytime you try to win everything, you must be willing to lose everything. -Larry Csonka *~Jessica~* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lucie...you're so talented in so many different ways....Humor, serious, love, erotica....Now then.....not saying that humor, serious and love are anything to be taken lightly....but just what are you doing this evening....say, about one a.m.? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lucie: There's surely a star shining on you.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
so very beautiful Lucie....like Isis this piece touched me too...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Toe.. I'd take you up on that offer, but suthern's got that bat and all.. so.. sorry.. your on your own bud..heheh Thank you all for your replies! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lucie....this is excellent, and one I can definately relate to right now ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
uhmmmm...another home run. This one hit home for a lot of people. I know "one" in particular who I could send it to. Do you? As usual, captivating and touches ya "right there"! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lucie, this is really beautiful, well done! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Wonderful, Lucie. This sounds like a familiar situation that I know of all too well. Couldn't have said it better. Nice job! Tyson |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Two thumbs up... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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