Open Poetry #3 |
Autumn Visions (repost) |
Alwye
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Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision, Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze. Beauty dances with the early morning sun, Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves. Boundless skies are feathered creamy white, As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow. By your side I embrace the perfect sight, And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow. The flight of time seems so distant here, Almost as if for us, the world has stilled. I feel so complete when you hold me near, A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled. If love were a vision, it surely must be this, Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves. Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss, And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Denise
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Absolutely beautiful! Love is great and so is autumn! You have so wonderfully wedded the two! ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
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Thank you very much!! I appreciate it! I too love autumn. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
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Wonderful Alwye, simply wonderful. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love the imagery, and as always, fall is my favorite season ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice Alwye.... The only problem I have with autumn is that it doesn't last long enough.... |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
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You've done it again, Alwye! Truly beautiful. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
gorgeous Alwye........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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