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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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I see you in my dreams at night Beneath the silver light of the moon a simple hope still shinning bright yet nothing could be wrong so soon I see the world within my dreams and the scope of it escapes my eyes nothing is ever what it seems I've always been told these simple lies should I trust the dreams that dwell within my head? or should I wait until the truth comes clean? as I lay here within this pestilence of a bed and wait for what was hidden to be clear seen I wish the things I feel so real could be seen by you at least then you'd know just how I feel and not treat me like a savage beast but one thing I know for sure you don't love me any more as clean as snow yet not as pure the outside is the same as the core the eyes of a hawk are sharp and keen yet even they can be fooled by a trick sometimes fate is cruel and mean and it leaves you feeling sick but if you had the heart I need then I know you'd never play for sometimes the words you heed are ones that you can seldom say |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Trusting,deceit, hurt and pain...being mistreated and unappreciated by the one you love is the most hurt of all...It scars the heart. Great poem of your honest feelings...liked your profile! Hahaha(Not in that order) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very well done, Des, the last two lines say it all. Love it when you Rhyme. ------------------ Michael Anderson I could not love except where Death Was mingling his with Beauty's breath - Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny Were stalking between her and me. EAP |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
alot of emotion pouring from this piece.....very good read desperado...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"the eyes of a hawk are sharp and keen yet even they can be fooled by a trick sometimes fate is cruel and mean and it leaves you feeling sick" These lines are very powerful and well written, des. You've done a fine job with this! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Des, great job with this one, I really like your style. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - des - this one is pretty intense... and well said, of course..  |
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