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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-30 09:50 PM

Rainbow hued droplets gently spiral earthbound,
Floating softly upon the vividly glittered breeze.
My mind is silent and I deeply cherish the sound,
Mild calmness quieting my tempest wrought seas.

Leaves of hunter colored velvet, silken to touch,
Carefully woven into a vivid tapestry of life.
I never knew heavenly starlight shined this much,
I never knew a thought could destroy all strife.

Creamy mists of white hover upon the silver grass,
The icy beauty shining within your sparkled eyes.
Our love brushes life upon this land so vast,
Flooding the brightened, gleaming sapphire skies.

Forever is ours for the taking upon this horizon,
Eternity is here, within the embrace of your arms.
The fire of our passion rages like the morning sun,
And when I wake from dreams, you shall keep me from harm.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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1 posted 1999-09-30 09:54 PM

Twas Beautiful Alwye!

Mystic Essence
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since 1999-09-29

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2 posted 1999-09-30 10:18 PM

Krista, this is a great piece of work. I know the feelings you felt when you wrote this, thats for sure. Exellent, my friend.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~

Denise

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3 posted 1999-09-30 10:29 PM

Very lovely, Krista!

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Denise

Alwye

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In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-09-30 10:30 PM

Thank you very much.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

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5 posted 1999-10-01 04:25 AM

Alwye: Beautifully written..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Mystic Essence
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6 posted 1999-10-01 09:04 PM

Love this, Alwye..

[This message has been edited by Mystic Essence (edited 10-01-1999).]

Alwye

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In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-10-01 09:06 PM

Thank you both.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30

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8 posted 1999-10-01 09:11 PM

Krista, there is so much to be gained through reading your poems... I think that you have quite a flair (and also, knack) for words.

Twas was great!

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 1999-10-01 09:14 PM

Thank you very much, my friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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10 posted 1999-10-01 09:17 PM

Not much else to say my friend. Rocking as always, Alwye.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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11 posted 1999-10-01 09:21 PM

Your gift for imagery is amazing

I love your work, it is always a pleasure to read it.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Pufalove
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since 1999-08-18

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12 posted 1999-10-01 09:38 PM

I wish I had such a way with words!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

13 posted 1999-10-01 10:38 PM

Wonderful

Balladeer

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14 posted 1999-10-01 10:55 PM

The work you put into your poetry is obvious...and a tribute to you. Beautiful Job.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

15 posted 1999-10-02 12:33 PM

Thank you all so much for your kindness.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12

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san diego, ca.

16 posted 1999-10-02 06:17 AM

Very good piece. Very dense and vivid. Thank you!

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