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RobertB
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0 posted 1999-10-06 07:35 AM


Sea of Tranquillity


Limitless waters of inspiration
claimed by no territorial federation-
communal to all
who sail the dream
of existence universal
governed by belief
of one Reality
which compass heading
is any direction
the wind may propel
this ship of thought,
constructed of
assorted words,
across the cosmos of my mind.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
IsabelleSkye
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1 posted 1999-10-06 08:44 AM


I like!
Isn't the mind a wonderful thing?

I.Skye

JennyLee
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2 posted 1999-10-06 10:57 AM


The wind may propel this ship of thought....
I like this very much.

Jenny

RobertB
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3 posted 1999-10-06 05:44 PM


yes..the mind is a huge wonderful place indeed.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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4 posted 1999-10-06 09:26 PM


Wonderful indeed! (the mind and the poem!)

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Denise

RobertB
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5 posted 1999-10-06 10:27 PM


the mind is a universe......write me a poem about that....whoops is that a challenge??

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-10-06 10:37 PM


Ah, the mind is truly a vast sea of information and at times confusion
Marilyn
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7 posted 1999-10-06 10:39 PM


I agree completely Robert. I constantly am trying to find ways to challenge my brain...expand it. Have you ever read a book called "Shadows of the Mind"? It is more scientific...but very expansive.
Denise
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8 posted 1999-10-07 08:42 PM


O.K. Robert, I'll try!

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Denise

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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9 posted 1999-10-30 01:13 AM


Cosmos of the mind! Great line!
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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10 posted 1999-10-30 01:42 AM


Great job RB, I was just saying similar to my hubby earlier today, though not as eloquently as you.

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
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11 posted 1999-11-02 06:19 PM


Beautiful! Loved this one!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-04-25 09:56 PM


glad I ran across this
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