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Open Poetry #3

Your beautiful pain

Patrick B
Member

since 1999-10-28

Posts 58
uk

0 posted 1999-10-29 03:38 PM

Do you ever doubt this path we are travelled?
Will our love become unravelled?
Twelve long months have come and gone,
Yet we are still apart,will we ever be one?
Words by the million from fingertips,
Will I ever taste your sweet lips?
So is this it,our only path?
I never get your smile or laugh?
Too much to lose,so much to gain,
I love you,this beautiful pain,
They say that love will find a way,
will we ever find that day?
I know my love can wait forever,
The answer to my questions,never,
Shalll I close us like a book?
If I'm sad I can take a look,
Feel the pages,stroke the cover,
The memory of my wonderful lover.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

1 posted 1999-10-29 07:47 PM

Hmm.... this feels familiar to me. I understand you here.

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-29 07:50 PM

I feel for all you long distance lovers. You have expressed your pain and longing very well. Hope you can be together soon!

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Denise

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-02 06:10 PM

Well expressed feelings! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-25 09:57 PM

ouch

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