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To love one another, Till death do us part, forsaking all
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To love one another, Till death do us part, forsaking all |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
first, just wanted to say this is not current *long deep sigh* but was looking over old poems and found this one from last year, and it helps me to post it to actually know that I have gotten past the pain To love one another, Till death do us part, Forsaking all others… A life time of love? A lifetime is a long, so very long time And what sun shines in purgatory When the love runs out? passions meet, vows betrayed, betrayal undressed for all to see friendship, trust, respect all blown to pieces pain blotting out reality, why and how Something so wonderful has Turned to utter darkness and despair? Forsaking all others? If I care to see another sunrise, The smile of a child…I must… But yet I pray it be the death of me. I don't remember agreeing to this, Did I prick my finger when I signed my name for surely we did this in God's name? Till death do us part? Does that mean that when your pain filled eyes finally blankly stare skyward and your heart beats no more I shall look to heaven and thank God For his mercy? Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord my last breath to take ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 10-05-1999).] [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 10-05-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit:..So poignant and heartbreaking...if only we could all return the love that is offered to each of us and that which we give with so much pleasure.. Tears here..HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks RG, tears here too, hadn't wanted to remember this, so it was hard... but tears and hugs make rainbows.....  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovey: The days may yet seem dark.... but you can look back and see how far you've come... and how many friends you have praying that your last breath is a LONG time in the future! Well done, O&O! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks suthern and yep, my friends are how I made it this far....you guys deserve the pat on the back more than me musta been rough, take a step forward, drag lovey, take a step forward.... LOLOL *sigh* you DO know how much I appreciate you 2 don't you? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovey: You've got that all wrong. *G* It's take a step, look over my shoulder to see where that other O&O is... take a step, notice that she's trying to cut ahead of me in Toe's fan club line, take a step, pick up my handy dandy baseball bat and TH-WHACK!!! Take a step back, check out the carnage, and try to punt the remains far, far away! LOL But just like your hair, you rejuvenate to haunt me once again. *G* |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
as long as I am appreciated, that's all I ask ROFG@punting the remains lolol......thanks for the smile, I did need it[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 10-05-1999).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lovey I hope the lady is at least looking up now. She's a fine person (you are), and I be happy to call ye me shipmate, lil lassie. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
"shipmates" huh? now from you sailor I consider that a compliment thanks! |
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