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To Mom |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Mom, there comes a time in life, for expressing gratitude, for teaching me so many things, from love to fortitude. Showing me how to recover from the darkness and the pain, to stand up again even when I failed, and make sunshine from the rain. There comes a time to tell you, what a good teacher you have been, never to quit when things are down, but to always hold up my chin. What a strong and sensitive person, you must surely be, mother you must always know, how important you are to me. And if you ever have stormy days, I can bring strength to, always remember your little girl, has so much faith in you! ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Very, Very, Beautiful piece Echo! I'm sure your mother is proud! Keep writing I enjoy your work so! HUGS  DBeth ------------------ When we give of ourselves whole heartedly,it comes back around ten fold. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Echo...truly lovely tribute to your mom......enjoyed the read much..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wonderful words my friend. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you everyone, I only hope my mom likes it as well! I have not given it to her yet------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Echo girl This is an uplifting poem. It is so good to see you thinking positive thoughts and to see you realizing how much you have and how important you are for uplifting your loved ones. Welcome home, little one. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You've done your Mom proud, Echo. Lovely Tribute, and I'm sure she already knows.. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
What a lovely poem, I am sitting here with tears in my eyes, I truely know what your saying here, I have a mom that is the same way. I am sure she will love it!!! I am very happy to see you back, and in good spirits, I would have given ya a formal welcome home, but the cake wouldn't fit in the slot in the computer, actually my computer blew a gasket, and it was down for several days. Pink Roses for ya, great to have ya back!!!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Echo this was beautiful! Your words are beautiful! She will love it! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Echo.....These are the words I hope to one day hear (or feel) from my children. Well done. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
LngJhnAg...Thank you for the welcome home and the kind comments on this poem. Like I siad before, I just hope my mom likes it. Isis...I hope I have done her proud, but I know I have caused her a lot more other things than proudness. Richard 33...*hands him a tissue* Thank you, and dont worry about not being able to give a formal welcome, I dont need one, but thank you anyways! WhtDove...I hope she loves it as much as you say! Marilyn... I hope these are the words my mom wants to hear as well. ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Echo, I think any mother would be proud to hear these words from their child. Often in life the words, the expressions of gratitude and love are given far too late, I'm glad you've had a chance to express them early and I think it can only strengthen the bond between you and your mother. Very heartfelt and beautiful. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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