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Burning Leaves
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Burning Leaves |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Burning Leaves When a conclusion to a season… yes a lifetime comes and is gone with fallen emotions raked in neat little piles waiting for the match as the chill in the air rises with the smoke and the heat from the flames warms us as the emptiness lingers when the Burning leaves. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Loved it....... ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Interesting way to put it! I liked this one. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very nice! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
"as the emptiness lingers when the Burning leaves." Excellent..nice use of symbolism on this one ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great Robert,loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great job Robert, something so simple is now beautiful. . ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ooh ooh ooh, I like this, especially the last lines. Beautiful! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you guys very much...this is one of my favorites being inspired by a very special friend. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Great job here Robert, thanks for sharing. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Simply lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Just had to read this one again! It's twisted in meaning, not a bad thing. hehe Just so many meanings in your works. Very very nice Robert! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat word play |
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