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Nobody Knew???? |
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denny New Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 2Cincinnati,Ohio USA |
SHE CAME FROM A GOOD FAMILY RAISED PROPER AND RIGHT FOLLOWED ALL THE GOLDEN RULES PRAYED TO GOD AT NIGHT THEN ONE DAY SHE MET A BOY AND QUICKLY FELL IN LOVE SHE BELIEVED THAT HE WAS SENT TO HER FROM HEAVEN ABOVE!! IN ONE SHORT YEAR SHE BECAME A MOTHER AND A WIFE BUT HER SWEET SMILE DISAPPEARED, HE HAD CHANGED HER LIFE. NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET NOBODY FELT HER PAIN NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES SHE THOUGHT SHE"D GO INSANE! ALL THE GOOD SHE SAW IN HIM SUDDENLY TURNED TO BAD SHE WOULD SUFFER FOR EVERTHING IN THE WORLD THAT MADE HIM MAD!!!!! BECAUSE OF LOVE FOR FAMILY SHE WOULD TAKE ALL SHE COULD HOPING THAT HE WOULD CHANGE BECAUSE HE SAID "HE WOULD" THEN ONE NIGHT HE WENT TO FAR BUT HE REALLY NEVER MEANT TO WHAT A PRICE SHE HAD TO PAY JUST BECAUSE SHE LOVED YOU!! NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET NOBY KNEW HER PAIN NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES SHE THOUGHT SHE"D GO INSANE WHEN ALL THINGS WERE SAID AND DONE I HEARD PEOPLE SAY----- THEY ALWAYS KNEW THAT THIS WOULD END IN JUST THIS WAY!!!! SHE THOUGHT THAT------- NOBODY KNEW HER SECRET NOBODY KNEW HER PAIN NOBODY SAW THE BRUISES WERE THEY ALL INSANE????? |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well written on a tough subject.We all need to speak up at the crime of abuse. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denny...very tragic and sad, but in turn, very well written. It reads like lyrics, is it written as such? On more comment, after 1 1/2 years on the internet, I've come to see Caps as screaming or shouting...I sometimes have a very hard time reading a poem done in all caps for that reason. Let your words shout for themselves as they do so well in this particular piece. Welcome to the group, looking forward to more. ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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