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Open Poetry #3

More to You

Rhiannon
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA

0 posted 1999-10-04 05:51 PM

The loss I feel is nothing but

An afterthought

To the love you've given me

I've never felt so much of something

So much but

Now I wish I could be

More to you.

I've dreamt of us together since

I've known

That you could love me too

And it's been everything I hoped

Everything, soon

I can be

More to you.

I've held your hand in hard times

I hoped

I could help you and get you through

Then I realized you had to help yourself

It's helped, although

Maybe my help one day it will mean

More to you.

I've kissed your tears away-

Kissed your trembling lips as they

Spoke words that touched my heart.

I've known the secrets of your past

You've trusted me with the darkest parts.

I've loved you beyond anything I've felt

I've given my heart, my body, my words

My beloved, I'm afraid I can't be much

More to you.

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-10-04 06:29 PM

Again...you've touched a part of my life with this poem. Like this one also.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-04 08:28 PM

Very lovely and touching!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-05 08:44 AM

Touching

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-10-05 09:51 AM

Rhiannon,
Well done.

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