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Our Goodbye
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Our Goodbye |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Our Goodbye They say that love can give your heart wings. I never believed that until I saw my heart fly back to Dallas. I stood at the window, waving as your plane taxied down the runway. Not knowing if you could even see me. Not really caring. I just knew I had to wave goodbye To the man who stole my heart. You called me later, to let me know you made it safely. And to tell me that you saw me waving. If I had known you could see me, I would’ve blown you kisses. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Sad one Tara...  Hope he won't be gone too long.  ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Tara, dear friend, The title should be "goodbye for now....hello to the future or something like that!" I am working on a poem myself.....inspired by our conversation last night.... Love ya, sweet friend! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad, hope he's back in your arms where he belongs soon.. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara, you are well deserving of this new found love and if this is any hint of future things to come because of your new found inspiration, we are quite fortunate too. This is a remarkable piece of work. Hugs Ruth ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tara, Enjoyed the read. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Ruth, thank you. He's been inspiring my poetry for a while, whether he knew it or not. There's a lot more poetry in my soul, inspired by our weekend together. I pray to find the words to express all that I feel. Julie & Isis, I also hope he'll be back soon. We're discussing a few dates but they all seem to far away. Sey and Julie Jordan Scott, thank you. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Wow Tara, wish I could see the glitter in your eyes when you write such beautiful pieces about that special someone.. Okay, we have to catch up..Can't wait to hear all the details...hehe.. Happy for you & Kudos.. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Tara this is a touching piece that I really enjoyed reading...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tara, this is really beautiful. The last line is perfect. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Balladeer, thank you. I feel honored to have you recognize my work. Pepper, thank you for your comment. Moonmoon, you're never online anymore! But yes, plenty of catching up to do! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ Haven't seen you here for much too long a while. I hope that someday you will return to see what we admirers STILL think of your beautiful poetry~ You are missed ... have a wonderful holiday season~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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