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Before The Night Falls
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Before The Night Falls |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Spreading twilight bathed in pink Rare opalescence A fading sun blends into moonlight Granted blissful audience to the final scene of evening's hour framed in the open window, pink surrenders to night, accompanied by the gentle applause of breeze-ruffled trees The day ends in lustrous pearl-glaze A vision of beauty fleeting and chased by the curtain of velvet depth over the hush of October peace ©caroline 1999 ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 10-17-1999).] [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 10-17-1999).] |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Pure, magical, beauty....lovely work.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful! ------------------ This is courage...to bear unflinchingly what heaven sends. ~Eurpides |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful, Caroline. That pink at the close of the day preceding night IS a very beautiful sight. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very soothing poem..gentle and lovely...  |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
**sigh** Magnificent. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very Lovely Caroline...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you all for your response. It is truly an honor to be blessed with scenes like those pink twilights. They don't come often. I wanted to share it ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for sharing this Caroline. Absolutely beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I SAID, use your imagination and you did, to create a master piece with such beauty. But what next I ask? |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This one likes the nature lover in me well as I have not seen sunrise or sunset for years. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
So soft, I can almost touch that sky - this is a gift of a poem, Caroline. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice effort. An enjoyable poem. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Caroline~ This is just sooooooo lovely~ Delicately adorned with stunning imagery~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...nice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetPoetess~ Though you are no longer here, I hope that life is good to you and that someday you will return to *gift* us with more beautiful poetry~ I miss you~ Lost your email address ... drop me a line at noles@totcon.com Happiest of holidays to you my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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