Open Poetry #3 |
Little Angel |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Little angel with hair of gold. return to heaven’s warm enfold. So glad I am you touched my world you are Mommy’s precious girl. Though life was short you lived it well. Touched many hearts and made them swell with love and laughter, your tender smile. Though you only stayed for just a while. I send you now to God above fill all the heavens with your love. Play nicely with the children there. My little angel with golden hair. Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from my soul. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok..pass the Kleenex! Very good, Lucie..so glad you put the disclaimer on it! My heart flip flopped when I read this! |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
Ok Luc....this one is too sad. We need more of your happy, carefree ones. Good thing it wasn't any longer, I may never have come out of it! love ya ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
What a lovely poem it made a tear in my eye, well done. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful poem Lucie...sooo sad, though. Good thing you posted the disclaimer, at least I won't have to bombard you with concerning emails this time...hehe ------------------ Michael Anderson The coldest lies are often told in silence. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sad Lucie.....might I copy this for use in a grief packet given out to parents a on my unit who have lost infants at or before birth? ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thank you all for your replies.. Hoot I would be honored!!!! Thank you so much. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Lucie, I am filled with such emotion from your words... Jenny |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thanks JennyLee! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can only ditto all of the others. How lovely that Hoot may use this to help others through the grieving process. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Beautiful and hopeful, though the subject is a sad one ... Nocht |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Lucie....sometimes it gives parents great comfort to know they are allowed to grieve their loss and to know there are others that have felt all the emotions they are going through and it is normal to feel that way. Hugs Ruth ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
0 0 0 (tears) ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Great poem, but oh so sad. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Lucie, I have sat here and read all your works now for weeks....I've seen every side of you girl !! You go from naughty to nice, and back again now with a tear-jerker !!! Your broad spectrum of talent and emotion is wothy of applause !!! ***clapping ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too had my heart in my mouth for a moment there until you said it hadn't actually happened to you. Beautifully done, you touched on the emotions well, I know as I've been there. Thanks. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Heartbreaking!!! What a touching poem..whew! ~sniffles~ |
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toocute4u_27 Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26Holdenville, OK USA |
This poem touched my heart. I almost lost my twin girls at birth and my son and could not imagine the pain of losing something so precious. Very beautiful and heart breaking. Excuse me now for I must find kleenex. ------------------ KJS |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very heartwrenching. I wouldn't even want to imagine this kind of pain. Ditto the Kleenex. ------------------ Denise |
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