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Witch's Brat
Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 100

0 posted 1999-10-03 01:17 PM

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Blue Eyed Wanderer
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 84
Rhode Island, US

1 posted 1999-10-03 01:47 PM

This was really good...it gave me goosebumps when i read it...great job!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-03 02:16 PM

I thought this is a great read.
You write so well!

Jenny

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-10-03 02:31 PM

my heart goes out to you WB.....you expressed your feelings in excellent form......Welcome to Passions......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-10-03 02:37 PM

How sad, I can really identify with the "her" you mention in this poem.......
I hope if "she" is a real person, she can stop this behaviour, trust me, it will ruin her. She probably needs nothing more than a good friend to stop her.....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

5 posted 1999-10-03 03:54 PM

I am sooooo the girl in this poem... or at least i feel like her... very well put WB... thanx

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-03 04:02 PM

Very well done, WB!

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Denise

Witch's Brat
Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 100

7 posted 1999-10-03 09:12 PM

Thanks to all who replied to this one. I know the "she" in this poem has seen it...thanks again everybody.

Pepper-thanks for the welcome.

SD-so do I, and thanks

Witch's Brat

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Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

8 posted 1999-10-05 11:24 PM

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