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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-03 10:24 PM


when i look at myself
sometimes i see nothing at all
other times though
when things are slow
i see all too clear
what lies under there
those are the times
that try my hand
upset the balance
blows my plans
then its back to zero
ground so narrow
air so dense
and everything seems to bring offense
to the pigs
like me
as they roll
in the blood and mud
never knowing the flood..
called love..



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Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-10-03 10:26 PM


Well said Jackel. I too have seen zero a few times.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




Saxoness
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Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
2 posted 1999-10-05 11:16 AM


I'm there right now

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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