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Drifting Away
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Drifting Away |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Light dapples through entangled clouds Tumbling gently in a silver flow I wander upon a cleansing breeze A phantom within reality Golden threads are fraying Freedom floods upon feathered wings My soul is drifting away Melancholy sweetness blooms Like spicy fragrance from a rose Lost within the silence am I Yet somehow unafraid The deepest comfort found in me The binds have now broken That once held me here Like crystal sands I slip through your fingers And gently float away Alone is how I choose to be Gracing the lightly glittered sky For all of time Remember me, my cherished love, For I live in you. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Good Poem.....I really liked it. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully written, Krista! ------------------ Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Alwye, love this, nicely written  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another free verse, I see - and another one well done!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ditto the above! Keep up the free verse please! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Enchanting piece of work, nicely done!! ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Beautiful and yet so sad. There seems to be so much of that in here as of late. I'm going to need to get to a "happy" forum... hmmmm...."Oh, Ron??!!"  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much! Hmm, happy forum, eh? Sounds good to me! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh this is beautiful! |
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