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Open Poetry #3

Lost Desire

toocute4u_27
Junior Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

0 posted 1999-10-01 06:08 PM

Slowly I slip away from life
With each day I grow more distance
Seems harder to distinguish reality from a dream
I can feel the life draining from within
I have no desire to stop it
For I lost my desire the day I lost you

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KJS

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-01 06:25 PM

Well written and oh so sad

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

toocute4u_27
Junior Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 26
Holdenville, OK USA

2 posted 1999-10-01 06:34 PM

thank you for your reply.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-10-01 06:59 PM

A powerful piece for one so short and sad...

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-04 09:37 PM

Very sad. Very well written.

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Denise

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

5 posted 1999-10-04 09:40 PM

I like this alot sounds like me a little but then again were all different please keep posting.

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life is short kill quick

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-17 05:06 AM

I know what you mean

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