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One Tiny Tear
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One Tiny Tear |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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I've cried enough tears to fill an ocean, over the loss, of all I hold dear. But now, the tears have subsided, all except one tiny tear. Each time, I hear your name, everytime time you cross my mind. A tear will appear, as if on cue, to remind me, of a bygone time. So many thoughts, and feelings, flows along with that tear. All of my love, anguish and pain, my wishes, dreams and my fears. The warm salty taste on my lips, reminds me, once more of your touch. You gave me your love, then denied me, and now I miss you so much. Somethings, are never forgotten, and I believe, that they shouldn't be. For as long, as that tiny tear can fall, you'll forever, still be with me. We all have our friends, our loves, and such, and hold on, to the things that are dear. But you are my everything, rolled into one, and that is in, my tiny tear. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know the feeling well, Kitty-some people will always stay with you, no matter what...You wrote it well. Good job! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Witch's Brat Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 100 |
I ditto Lizzy's comment, Kitty**. Your poem is beautiful. Witch's Brat |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad and beautiful, Kitty. ------------------ Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sad and truly moving.. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
Well, Ms. Kitty, you certainly can express yourself with poetry. This is sad, hits home, and is a keeper! Lovely. ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written expressions of sadness, thanks for sharing ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Thank you all for your comments.. Sometimes it helps to *pour* out the saddness so your heart has room for happiness. I'm slowly making more room in my heart! ;-) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Kitty! |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
Well done. I've been feeling the same lately, but I could have never said it as beautifully as you have. I loved it. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Our tears say so much yet so silently.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
My sincere thanks to all of you that took the time to read and respond to my poem.. It has been pure joy to be here and to have the privilege to read some of the most beautiful poetry I have ever read..RIGHT HERE..in PASSIONS IN POETRY!! [This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 10-05-1999).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
gee - I wonder how many tiny tears I live in? I know ol' Toerag has some for the way I outshine him. I know Balladeer has some for the way I allow Toerag to get the best of him. I know suthern has some for the way Toerag can never be as sweet as me. I know Rainbow Girl has some for the way I turned my rowboat around mid-Atlantic and headed for the Mississippi. But other than that, I wonder..... |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
if only one tear would come out instead of a river everytime i heard his name i would be happy. do you mind if i print this out? |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Another cat!!! Geesh! We're turning into a pound here! LOL... just teasing Jitty, I love cats! And this poem. Some people stick with you, as do some poems. This will be one! |
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MEGAN Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 17Cottonwood, Ca United States |
very moving poem.. i know exactly what u r going through.. it is when i write at times at these, with the motivation which that one tiny tear brings, i do my best work.. I love this poem. |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
This is very touching. I can really relate to it. You've expressed the feeling so well. Thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are amazing |
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