»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #3
»
Quiet Morning
| Open Poetry #3 |
|
Quiet Morning |
|
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
|
Quiet Morning Quiet is the morning Where two souls meet Silence but for the beating Of their two hearts Earth creates the backdrop Time stands still Breathless words are spoken And two become one ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
The usual cliche of short and sweet applies here, Hoot! I like I like!! I echo the sentiment of course. I actually want time to hurry up and THEN stand still!!!!!! Magical poem... |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Breathtaking! Says a lot in few words! |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn...since we are in the same boat so to speak, it's easy to echo each other sentiments. I am in a hurry for Nov to come, but know I won't want time to pass at all when we are together ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whtdove...thanks, you kind of snuck in on me there  ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
||
|
Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well Ruth, you know of course that I love it! I'm kinda sad right now, just did the math and found that severn and I live over 6000 miles away from each other!  |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks denise Chris....I'm sorry to hear of the distance, but remember...love knows no bounds...you and Severn will be together Hugs Ruth ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
AAAKKK! No way! Not that far. Don't you dare convert it into kilometres, Chris. |
||
|
Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
WOW! All that come to mind is: Wow! ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Severn, have faith Puffalove...many thanks ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hoot, this is beautiful, I love everything you write ....be assured even if I don't get to comment on all of them, your poems make me smile and touch my heart |
||
|
Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Sweet sentiment, hoot. Lovely. |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done Hoot. So few words, so much meaning. |
||
|
Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I am definetly addicted to your poems of love Hoot......... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...thanks everyone for your nice comments ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: For the best reason of all... I was an hour late for work this morning. As always, I like your style. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Andrew....smiling...a bit envious here Wish I could say the same, but you are right, no better reason to be late ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
||
|
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: Would that I could share, but my wife won't let me clone and I'm a one-woman kind of guy... Always have been... always will be! Happy Hunting! |
||
|
Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
Cool Poem hoot and once again another poem of your is center of attention  your poems are really good and out standing.-Jim R. ------------------ Love hurts when your flying solo. -Jim Raynor ----------- "Be Nice, Every one is fighting a tough war against them selves" - "John Wats" - Jim Raynor( at least i think John Wats Said that. |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Ruth! I love it! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Andrew, that's okay, I happen to be a one man woman too.....I was envious not of your wife, but the fact that you got to make my dream a reality and I have to wait till November Jim...thanks, as usual you are too kind Tara...thanks bunches |
||
|
Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
I love the line " when two become one" Wonderful poem! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
||
|
johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Excellent, Ruth. Love the first two lines. Tyson |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Dragoness and Tyson |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||