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Brianna Part 3 (to change the ending for For Never)
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Brianna Part 3 (to change the ending for For Never) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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That night they shared so special, A joy to cherish forever and a day, In morning's light he awoke, And watched his Brianna dreaming, a smile she did display. But then a knock upon the door, A message for Roderick from their Lord, He must leave immediately, And do battle with his sword. Back in his homelands, Many a days journey away, He would be the leader there, It was where he'd have to stay. Was her uncle doing this to keep them apart? He dearly wanted to know. But there had been trouble in the North for many a moon, He would never return, it was so. He woke his new found love, He wanted her to be his wife, For he had never loved another this way, She had become his life. She wanted to desperately go with him, But was duty bound, To help her mother with the children, She was needed to stay around. If she turned her back on then, It would be forever, They would never forgive her, If she let them down, no way, not ever. They held each other close and cried an ocean of tears, They had to go their seperate ways, Now alone and with some fear, No one to share their days. Decisions made by the unhappy couple, Thought of one more outcome, They could end it all here and now, But this way was weak and woesome. She couldn't let down her family, Roderick couldn't let down his men, Another chance to better himself, Is what he wanted then. He was to leave before nooning, Just pack, check provisions and ride, A journey of lonliness and misery, Without Brianna by his side. They did their duty, And often remembered their night of bliss, When it all began, With a simple little kiss. They both eventually married, And were happy enough, But both also had a special talisman, They loved and remembered when times got rough. Their one night together, When they touched the stars and moon, Their talisman to carry, A most precious and magical loving that ended all too soon. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
sad and beautiful... that talismen... I shant forget it.. EAB BTW great ending...sometimes the most romantic stories have a tragic ending.. ------------------ For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So glad you liked it my challenger  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Awww.....they should have been together.Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Watcher, but For Never included, the cannot be together bit in the challenge. I would've preferred them to be together too!! ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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