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Open Poetry #3

So Deeply

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 1999-11-08 07:09 PM

When you love someone deeply,
Then theuy became yours,
When you feel so deep,
To watch them grow slowly,
You feel slowly in love,
You want to touch their hand,
But you're afaird to ask,
How they feel for you,
I watch you grow,
Every day,
I open my arms for you,
I comfort you as you grow,
You become my life,
I open my hand,
And watch you grow,
As the days go by,
Iknow that,
When beauty grows,
It lies in your heart,
But not in minds,
You gave me love,
You gave me courage,
And when I want to love you,
I love you,
More and more,
I learn so much from you,
I learnt that
When the beauty shows into light,
It really shows

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 1999-11-08 09:33 PM

enjoyed your poem. I haven't ever seen any other members from India.. welcome.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

2 posted 1999-11-08 09:38 PM

love is like watching a flower open up isn't it??

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-09 02:02 PM

Loved the imagery.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 1999-11-09 03:01 PM

lovely indeed. : )

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny

5 posted 1999-11-09 04:05 PM

so beautiful !

There are two ways of spreadng light: To be the candle or the mirror that reflects it. EDITH WARTON

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