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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-08 10:30 PM


Fashion Statement Of Love
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Gloria Vanderbilt's got nothing on me.
Her designer jeans fit me to a tee.
I ride the Polo pony across this town,
and L'Oreal Blonde I wear for my crown.

Nothing on these lips
but Lasting Color of rose.
And Maybelline lashes,
for flirting you know.

On my cheeks,
a little Max Factor blush.
Underarms done in Secret ...
now hush !

Victoria's Secret is a secret indeed.
Hidden for only a lover to see.
A gossamer gown of black satin and lace,
with nothing else ...
but a smiling face.

Decked out in fashion,
waiting for Mr. Right.
I know that he will love me,
but, will it be tonight?

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 1999-11-08 10:41 PM


Marge,
You better lock the door and take the telephone off the hook. Loved the poem.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-11-08 10:44 PM


'See More' ... is that you I hear knocking?

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RobertB
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3 posted 1999-11-08 10:46 PM


Marge...my screen is all fogged up!

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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-11-08 10:52 PM


RobertB ... How can it be that 'See-More' is breathing on your screen?
heh ... heh

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5 posted 1999-11-08 10:52 PM


No, Marge, it's me. There's just something about a Victoria's Secret girl..

I promise I will be your pal
If you stay with that L'Oreal.
You'll have me knocking at the door
When you put on Christian D'Or.

I'll be there in a little while.
Victoria's Secret...and a smile?
I mean...I'll be there right away!
After I say goodbye to Mary Kay!!!!

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6 posted 1999-11-08 10:58 PM


Not sure there's a Christian
behind this D'Or ...
at least not
anymore !

Now you guys
are getting bolder ...
nothing else on but
my ~White Shoulders~

Say goodbye to Mary Kay ...
that old broad
has had her day !

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7 posted 1999-11-08 11:18 PM


Cute, Marge! ROFL!

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Marge Tindal
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8 posted 1999-11-08 11:22 PM


Why thank you Denise. Kind of figured a gal would show up at the make-up counter sooner or later. Whew ! Just in time, me thinks !

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9 posted 1999-11-08 11:41 PM


Just White Shoulders? That is all?
You've made me a Neanderthal!
Those products simply are esthetic
You don't need to use cosmetics.

Just be the woman that you are
And keep that gook stuff in the jar.
You won't have to wait for long
And, if you do, there's something wrong!


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10 posted 1999-11-08 11:57 PM


It isn't cosmetic.
It's aesthetic.
It's love potion in a bottle.
It's akin to the fuel
that puts you in full-throttle.

A little behind the ears,
A little on the erotic zone
It's ~A White Shoulders~ night ...
are you on?


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11 posted 1999-11-09 12:03 PM


Marge you delight me with your quick wit and ability to write.....Blessed is your gift for it is one of beauty. Grace and peace be with you
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12 posted 1999-11-09 12:08 PM


Why, First_Knight ... thank you so very much.
Now you tell Balladeer that I'm a beauty,
'gook stuff in a jar or not'!
Keep those words up and you'll be turning some gals head again real soon.

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13 posted 1999-11-09 12:26 PM


Dear Marge, to say this causes pain
But I root for the Hurricanes.
I'm sure you give your heart and soul
To Bobby and his Seminoles.

I'm afraid, if I might be so bold,
That those white shoulders may grow cold
When I cheer for Miami to
Do a job on FSU.

If you don't see a problem here
On which team we prefer to cheer
Then on I am...and at your door
GO!TEAM!GO! and SCORE!SCORE!SCORE!



Marge Tindal
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14 posted 1999-11-09 12:39 PM


Balladeer ...
Did you suffer a blow?
To the game I did go ...
on October 9 ...
the Hurricanes came to Bobby's Bowl ...
and mighty blew the wind.
It would seem that the Seminoles
beat the Hurricanes AGAIN !

In case you think that I am wrong,
the game was so much fun.
We actually blew the Hurricanes away
THIRTY ONE to twenty one!

~White Shoulders~
are HOT ...
a WINNER I've got !


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-09-1999).]

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15 posted 1999-11-09 01:03 AM


Yes, well, we got our fannies beat.
The boys came home in full retreat
But those Seminoles got such a scare
I hear they changed their underwear!

Miami came at 2 -2
There chance for glory pretty through
While FSU, with their big guns,
In this whole land were number one.

What happened? Well, I have to laugh
The 'Canes controlled the whole first half!
Those little boys from U of M
Just ran the dickens out of them.

Old Bobby has a memory
Of things the way they used to be
When U of M won every fight.
He hates to hear the words "Wide right!"

At the half, he took his team aside
And vowed to commit suicide
If they would blow another one
The way that they had always done.

That's how they won...to save their coach
That Bobby has a slick approach
He would have died in misery
If they'd not pulled out victory.

But I must say, I'm on their side
Our other teams have all but died
So, Margie, you can count on me
To cheer you on to victory.

Just beat those Gators...pretty please
And bring that Spurrier to his knees
Or else we'll see the Seminoles
Playing in the Felon Bowl!

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16 posted 1999-11-09 01:13 AM


Oh, stop it ! I'm laughing so hard.

Sure, will be glad (snicker) to have you on our side.
Now that your boys laid down and died.
Promise me that you won't whine
like Spurrier does ....EVERYTIME !

Shoulda' - Woulda' - Waaaaahhhhh !

By the way ... what size clothes do you wear?
Just in case Warrick gets down there?
Crooks, felons, thiefs and thugs ...
coming to MIAMI ... to get some drugs !

Enough of this ...
I'm bleary-eyed ...
Thanks, Balladeer ...
going beddy-bye !
Night.




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Martie
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17 posted 1999-11-09 03:04 AM


Hey, you guys have gone to sleep
and left me here,
not counting sheep
but wondering what team
where and how
could help me get to sleep
right now.

Sorry Marge
I got so caught up
in your repartee's form
that I forgot to say
you wrote a great poem


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18 posted 1999-11-09 01:43 PM


Too cute!!LOL

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Drauntz
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19 posted 2007-05-17 01:53 AM


wow, wow, wow. I wish to read more of this kind of yours. A very youthful heart is there.

happily enjoyed.

dgvarner
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20 posted 2007-07-01 09:53 PM


woohoo!!  that's a hot one!

love it!!

hugs, g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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