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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-08 07:56 PM


Soldier With Wings
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

If I should ever meet
a soldier in the sky ..
I'd snap a crisp salute
and never pass him by.

If, on my walk through Heaven,
I should chance to meet
a soldier there walking ...
I'll fall right to my knees.

I'd look up at him with honor,
love and thankful prayers.
For every freedom I ever had,
was mine because he cared.

He gave his life in battle
to keep this land free.
A place where I could remember
the choices he left for me.

I will remember,
with a thankful heart,
the soldiers who gave their lives
then from us did depart.

So if I should meet
a soldier in the sky ...
I'd fall to my knees
and look him in the eye.

I'd take just a moment
and thank him for the price,
he paid so I might live
in a land so nice.

I'd shed a tear of thankfulness
for my freedom, among other things.
He was somebody's child ...
this soldier with wings.

After a moment of thanks,
he'd turn and walk his way.
One hug around his neck
among the medals he displays.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-08 08:15 PM


Such a moving tribute, Marge. Very moving.

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Denise


Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-11-09 01:57 PM


Beautiful tribute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Munda
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3 posted 1999-11-09 03:20 PM


This is beautiful : )
Toerag
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4 posted 1999-11-09 03:25 PM


Sweetie....your stuff is fantastic!!!
Martie
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5 posted 1999-11-09 03:30 PM


Amen to that Marge--great poem.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-11-09 07:17 PM


Beautiful friends. Denise, Watcher,Munda, Toerag, and Martie, thank you for the compliments on this piece. The honor goes to the men and women who inspired it.
And so it is done.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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First__Knight
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7 posted 1999-11-13 09:53 PM


What a heartfelt poem. As a ex soldier I fully know the wages of the job and to hear the thanks by those I fought for in war expressed in words is a priceless gift. Thank you!
Drauntz
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8 posted 2007-05-17 01:51 AM


I shall cry... indeed.

beautiful poem.

dgvarner
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9 posted 2007-07-01 10:30 AM


Awesome!  this is awesome...
Having lost a friend in the military a few years ago, I feel this one even stronger!  I really appreciate this write, margie...

hugs, g

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