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Lilli
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 1999-11-08 01:19 AM


I'm so lonely
I wish you were
Here with me
Right by my side
Your hand lightly
Brushing my cheek
Telling me that
You love me

I'm so lonely
It hurts so much
To think of you
By Her side
Your hand lightly
Brushing Her cheek
Stroking Her hair
Holding Her hand

I'm so lonely
I want to hate you
When I think of you
Gazing passionately
Into Her blue eyes
Telling Her
That you love Her
More than anything

I'm so lonely
I want to hate you
To scream and
Curse your name
When I think of the
The way that you
Threw our love
So far away
And took it up
With Her

I'm so lonely
I lie awake in bed
Watching the shadows
Rotating on my walls
I think of nothing
Yet still I think
Of everything you did
To hurt me so much
To make me
So lonely

I'm so lonely
I want to find
Someone new
I don't want to
Go back to you
I want a change
A new idea of
The future

I'm so lonely
I want you to leave
But you make me listen
You tell me that
You still love me
That I'm beautiful
Should I believe you?
It all seems a dream

I'm so lonely
And more confused
Than ever before
What do I do?
There's this girl
On your arm
Yet you tell me
You love me
Do I take you back?



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Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-08 10:42 AM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-08 09:39 PM


Very nicely done, Lilli! And in answer to the question, I wouldn't!

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Denise


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