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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
Fights you dont remember Love gone up in flames Family that had left you I know it's all the same Walking in a stupor Passing by your sight Detesting your own presence What the hell happened last night |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
dang, haven't we all felt like that? Good read. Corinne |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
funny......I feel that way after a parental conversation. lol ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
LOL at first I thought geeez that's what happens when some people drink too much  then I thought...there's sometimes my husband and I argue and a day later I've forgotten about what LOL  This was great X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
I am not sure what you are getting out of my poem but so long as you see something that is great - though drinking Is an issue or the issue - the big point is pain - pain from what ever happened last night - pain from family issues - their judgement and in a way having left you or left you out- hating your self for what you did wondering what you did - hating looking in the mirror - the walk of shame home ect....honestly i wrote this poem a while ago - maybe even a year i am not sure but thanks for reading |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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