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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I seem to be looking For something But what? I do not know My eyes are glazed over So it is as if I can't see at all What am I looking for? I seem to be looking for perfection in me And everyone else I come in contact with Perfection is so hard An unacheivable thing So why am I looking? Striving so? For something that my glazed over eyes cannnot even find The reason is simply, maybe... I'm trying too hard? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nice poem, Joy. Welcome to Passions. I don't believe anyone ever reaches perfection, striving so hard for it can certainly lead to frustration! ------------------ Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hehehe I can relate! I am of the mind that it'll get done right if I do it myself *pout* LOL anyways, I like your poetyr, it has a wry twist to it  X |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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