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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-09-30 06:09 PM

Misty Moonlight

Mindless moments
of time elapsing
trapped within
a floating bubble.
Twinkling stars
singing in unison
as misty moonlight
dances by.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-09-30 06:51 PM

Very well done. You portrayed a huge emotion is few powerful words.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-09-30 07:01 PM

Not a syllable gone to waste. Excellent.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-30 08:09 PM

Beautiful! I was there!

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Denise

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 1999-10-01 12:33 PM

I enjoyed.

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 1999-10-01 04:44 PM

I thank you all

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-10-01 05:13 PM

Absolutely beautiful and moving, not a wasted word amoung them

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12

Posts 214
san diego, ca.

7 posted 1999-10-02 05:10 AM

Nice. As already said, nothing wasted.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 1999-10-03 04:40 PM

This style seems to work well for you LD..

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

9 posted 1999-10-23 08:32 PM

I liked this one.....a lot ! : )

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 1999-10-23 09:29 PM

Very lovely!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

11 posted 1999-10-24 10:29 AM

I liked this!
Nice (brief) descrption!

I.Skye

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"With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls; for stony limits cannot hold love out; and what love can do that dares love attempt." Romeo & Juliet Act II

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

12 posted 1999-10-24 01:20 PM

Perhaps the best of yours yet. Definitely, a style for you. I echo the others when saying you have not wasted a word. Concise and succinct.... keep them coming.

dp

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