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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
More than my lover my best friend More than my friend my lover More than imaginable my blessing More than forever my eternity More than my heart my soul More than his kiss his being More than his words his wisdom More than promises his loyalty More than possessivness his protection More than my shame his forgiveness More than my life he is my love |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This piece likes me much it does. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely indeed ! : ) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful Jennifer.....loved the read ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fantastic, as you've grabbed me with this! Great! I like how you did this. The format you put it in. So few words, but really touching deep. Says a lot! |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
thank you all for your wonderful words |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Jennifer, this is just so beautiful! I love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
thank you Denise such responses make posting so rewarding |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
That's how true love should be. I liked this, and look forward to more from you! X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
I am fortunate enough to love somoene that much but a lot of pain can accompany it when it is impossible to be with the person. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
romantic write |
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