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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-11-05 10:54 PM


This is as close as I could get to a dream I had last night....a quite lovely dream about a very special someone..


Silent music shimmers gold
A whisper of the trees
A kiss of sunset hues
The melody is the spirit
Of our cherished ones
The rolling of the waves
And their fragrant sprays
Memories long forgotten
Embedded within pearl sands
Now so gently flown
Upon silver laden wings
To my own utopian lands
Remembrance now so sweet
A softened trace of your touch
A glance into gentle eyes
Consumed with blazing love
Your whisper breaks the distance
Caressing my shivering skin
And somehow the horizon melts
Your warmth embraces me
I am now safe to drift in dreams
Within your loving arms.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


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1 posted 1999-11-05 10:57 PM


Ohhh......this is exquisite.....Beautiful.

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WhtDove
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2 posted 1999-11-05 11:33 PM


What a picture you painted! Well done in expression! Wanna send some of those dreams my way?
Alwye
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3 posted 1999-11-06 12:09 PM


SD-- Thank you.

Whtdove-- I'd love to send such a dream your way..

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


Dark Angel
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4 posted 1999-11-06 01:08 AM


This is really beautiful Alwye,wow what a nice dream! well done

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Samuel Coleridge



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5 posted 1999-11-06 01:44 AM


Lovely!

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6 posted 1999-11-06 09:02 AM


As always, Krista, your poetry shimmers in eloquence and beauty I like this much!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


Denise
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7 posted 1999-11-06 10:35 AM


Sounds like a wonderful dream!

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Denise


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8 posted 1999-11-06 12:30 PM


Beautiful dream and written remembrance.
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9 posted 1999-11-06 12:48 PM


Very nice images.

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Alwye
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10 posted 1999-11-06 08:54 PM


Thank you all much!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


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11 posted 1999-11-07 02:12 AM


Beautiful dream Alwye. : )
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12 posted 1999-11-07 08:02 PM


Another little poem to grace my box, and send a little light of beauty this way. Thank you much, Krista, great piece!

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13 posted 1999-11-07 08:54 PM


I absolutely adored this the first time I read it! I just didn't have time to reply, but I am now!!!!
X

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Alwye
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14 posted 1999-11-07 10:10 PM


Thank you both so much for your kindness.

Dusk-- I truly appreciate your kindness and friendship. You're one in a million, my friend.

X Angel-- Thank you so much. It means a lot.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


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15 posted 2004-04-25 08:36 PM


a beautiful dream indeed
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