Open Poetry #3 |
Drift In Dreams |
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is as close as I could get to a dream I had last night....a quite lovely dream about a very special someone.. Silent music shimmers gold A whisper of the trees A kiss of sunset hues The melody is the spirit Of our cherished ones The rolling of the waves And their fragrant sprays Memories long forgotten Embedded within pearl sands Now so gently flown Upon silver laden wings To my own utopian lands Remembrance now so sweet A softened trace of your touch A glance into gentle eyes Consumed with blazing love Your whisper breaks the distance Caressing my shivering skin And somehow the horizon melts Your warmth embraces me I am now safe to drift in dreams Within your loving arms. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Ohhh......this is exquisite.....Beautiful. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a picture you painted! Well done in expression! Wanna send some of those dreams my way? |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
SD-- Thank you. Whtdove-- I'd love to send such a dream your way.. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really beautiful Alwye,wow what a nice dream! well done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lovely! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
As always, Krista, your poetry shimmers in eloquence and beauty I like this much! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like a wonderful dream! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful dream and written remembrance. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very nice images. ------------------ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all much!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful dream Alwye. : ) |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Another little poem to grace my box, and send a little light of beauty this way. Thank you much, Krista, great piece! ------------------ "All is gone except the will to be." - Metallica - "For Whom the Bell Tolls" |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I absolutely adored this the first time I read it! I just didn't have time to reply, but I am now!!!! X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you both so much for your kindness. Dusk-- I truly appreciate your kindness and friendship. You're one in a million, my friend. X Angel-- Thank you so much. It means a lot. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful dream indeed |
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