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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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No soul The leaps of man has stained the land, Leaving their marks too deep. They sweep the boundaries of demand, In race with natures keep. Their flowers are of welders bloom, High very high they rise. Making shadows and much gloom, And squalor seems the prize. There is no bail, no holy grail, Where cloud and shadows lie. It's a doubtful course that they sail, The daffodils they die. The shadows loom in conscious dream A burning living flame. It's all a part the conscious scheme But negatives remain. I can but say this lonely goal, Just seems to have no soul. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Most excellent, Sey! As always, I enjoy your work immensely  ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline, Immense is wonderful thank you so much *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another Amen! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I admire your writing Seymour as always. Top notch! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much!.Excellent! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the read and amen. Martie, Thank you for the top motch. Watcher, Thank you for the like. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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